Most of the feedback was for Luke's developed scenes, but here's the feedback that relates to me:
- Make sure to keep the flow of the advert
- Keep continuity with the type - think of it more as a character
- Play with type transitions
- Keep consistency with the green of the aliens and of the turtle
- For the stars in space, I could use after effects particle generation to give it some movement
- Cut your own scenes into the overrall animatic to see them together, and to make sure that it is visually cohesive as currently each scene seems too different from one another
With this, we decided that I should do all of the text at the end once the core scenes are done, to make sure it remains cohesive. In addition to this, we could keep a cutout style through all the scenes, as well as use the same texture and even have half tone dots in multiple scenes. Also the wiggles as secondary animation will help too.
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