I first tried a more subtle anticipation scene, using the movement of the arm as the anticipation before closing the laptop lid. I don't think this was a successful example as the anticipation isn't entirely clear, it just feels like two separate movements. I feel that it could be improved by having a pause when the hand is just about to grab the lid, showing the character's indecisiveness.
I then tried a more bold example, using a firework or rocket taking off. This was definitely better as the exaggeration of the anticipation worked really well in conveying the action and it was a much more engaging scene for it. To improve I feel that I could either have the rocket shake a lot more and proggressively more aggressive, or I could have it start shaking before the fuse reaches the rocket to tie the two actions together, as at the moment it seems a bit stilted.
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