501 - Study Task 4 - Writing an Introduction

 I started this task before realising I needed to change my question. Here is the original, outdated version:

Reviewing the introduction for this question, I see how I would have had trouble with both the writing and practical response. It would have been harder to find relevant sources, and the practical would have been only at one section, rather than throughout the project.

I re-wrote the draft introduction to fit with my new question:

Part of the lecture on how to write essays included the tip of writing the introduction towards the end, as it is one of the hardest parts of the project to write, therefore I am going to take that advice and just use this draft for the time being, going back and editing it after writing the bulk of my investigation. 

I think for the time being it is okay, as it outlines the purpose of my project as well as what exactly I will be investigating.