- Storyboard is just a rough thing for our group, so don't focus on making it amazing
- Reflection in binoculars is good
- Make sure there is a rhythm to the shot length, aim for longer to quicker
- The binoculars should be taken away quite early on
- The binocular overlay needs to be centered in the frame as it's offputting
- Sound design is really important for this film
- Credit Ceylin's mum for sounds
- Mike was confused as to how the creep got onto the girl's balcony - we need to make the fire escape thing more obvious (this will be done when KK changes the angle of the balcony shot, as a more acute angle will show the fire escape in more detail)
- It may be a good idea to have details showing how the girl realises the creep is in her apartment - could have the balcony door be slightly ajar, or have a wet patch on the carpet
- Mike was worried about how the closet door opens, as the creep wouldn't be able to escape, but we weren't intending him too. Also we wanted the door to open like that to reveal the blood trail.
- Mike's worried about the length of the short, it being possible too long
- Maybe add 3D lighting to the girl's room to make sure lighting is on point
- Make notes on how long things take for future reference
After this call, I asked KK to send me the storyboard file and I'll make those changes for the animatic. I also think that when the animatic is done we'll be able to see the flaws more clearly.
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