To prepare for the animatic, and to make them read better, I cleaned up the storyboards digitally and added the travel sequence to it. I took out some of the flashback scenes as they weren't entirely necessary and the story as already too long, and I made sure to take into consideration how some scenes would be transitioning between each other, such as the pan up daisy as well as the long pan across the first two background scenes in the travel sequence.
Overall I'm happy with this storyboard, as I feel it communicates the story very clearly and works as a whole. I think the flashback sequence is my main concern, as that is the main area where my story could become unclear. I really need to differetiate it from the rest, and try and communicate what's happening in each of the stills very clearly.
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