This is my updated pitch bible. I fleshed it out from the previous version, replaced the Beram turnaround with a fixed feet version, and replaced the storyboards with a cleaner version that's more presentable.
I'm pretty pleased with this, as I think it shows off my idea and short very well. I particularly like the background slides, as well as the emotional graph slide as that illustrates the mood I'm trying to aim for. I also think it was a good idea to show the process behind the shots, to give an idea of workflow.
To improve:
- I should finish the walk cycle and make it cleaner
- I could add a lot more concept art to show the world off beyond just my short
- I could have made that first slide a bit more interesting to look at
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